Meh... ([info]thetwistedstar) wrote,
@ 2006-05-12 16:20:00
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Current music:Atreyu -- My Fork In The Road (Your Knife In My Back)

Soap and Water
Title Soap and Water
Author [info]thetwistedstar
Pairing Gerard x Frankie
Rating NC-17
Summary Pointless shower smut for my inner fangirl. *squeal*
Author's Note This story is the product of a comment made by [info]exiled_girl and all credit for the idea goes to her.

Sidenote I'm thinking I'll start looking for a BETA to check over my work. If you would like the job, dazzle me! XD





The hot water poured down the body of a young man, his tattoos looking slightly distorted from the ripples. He leaned his head underneath the spraying water, letting it soak his hair and face, trickling down to the rest of his bare body. His mind wandered to everything and nothing, just enjoying the hot water unknotting the muscles in his back and shoulders. It was soothing and he slipped into an almost half-sleep state from it.

Then came the sound of the door opening and he stuck his head out of the side of the shower curtain to see who was intruding. It was Gerard, his hair greasy and hanging in his face. He started searching through Frank's stuff over the sink.

"What the hell are you doing?" Frank demanded as the water dripped down his nose and landed on the floor.

"Eyeliner...I ran out."

Now how the hell did Gerard run out of eyeliner? His bathroom held practically any color or brand since he was always in search of the perfect one. "Well go home and get your own!"

"Don't have what I want at home," he replied as he kept searching.

An annoyed look passed over Frank's face before his eyes landed on Gerard's hair. "Dude, you need a shower," he said.

Gerard looked over at him, his eyebrows knit in confusion. He closed the cabinet door and looked in the mirror as he ran a hand through his shiny hair. "You think?"

"Yeah," came the all-too-honest reply. Frank closed the shower curtain back and stuck his head under the water again.

With a shrug Gerard started taking his clothes off to join Frank in the shower. They landed in a pile on the floor next to the other stack and he walked over to the shower. Pulling back the curtain, he stepped into the almost scalding water. Frank turned around, a smile gracing his face as he took in the sight before him. He hadn't necessarily meant join him in the shower, but he wouldn't complain either.

Frank let Gerard squeeze by him, their bodies rubbing together as the older man stood under the water and let it run through his hair and down his body. As Gerard grabbed the shampoo and proceeded to wash his hair, Frank grabbed the soap and began to lather it on his own chest before lathering it on Gerard.

Gerard looked down at Frank as his hair was rinsed clean and a half smile slipped onto his lips. He was completely turned on at the sight of Frank washing him and it was pretty damned obvious at that point. Of course, Frank would take that moment to rub his own body against Gerard, inciting a soft groan of need. He leaned down and softly kissed Frank as the younger man wrapped his arms around his neck. Gerard greedily pressed him against the shower wall, his tongue working furiously over Frank's now in his lust.

Their slick bodies pressed tightly together as tongues intertwined and hands roamed. Frank's soft nails gripped Gerard's back as he teased the lip ring before biting his bottom lip with enough pressure to earn a moan from Frank. His hand slid down between the two bodies and gripped Gerard hard, forcing him to press harder against him. He moved his hand quickly, the soft pants between kisses making him hard to the point of pain.

Finally shoving Gerard back almost forcefully, Frank turned so his front was to the wall and didn't have to wait long before Gerard was pressed against his back again. A soft moan echoed in the small room as he felt him pressing hard into him. A warm hand rubbed down Frank's back before going down further. Gerard slid a finger inside Frank, the younger man pressing back into him again with the urge to feel more. As Frank moved back slightly, Gerard took the chance to press his lips on his neck before biting softly. He left a trail of kisses across his back before sliding himself inside Frank in one swift motion.

Both men let out a grunt of pleasure as they stood still, enjoying the feel of their soapy bodies molded together. Gerard's teeth sank into Frank's shoulder, forcing Frank to tense up for a moment. The feeling rushed through them both as they started rocking back and forth slowly at first. Then it became faster and faster, their sweat mixing with the water pooling around their feet.

Bodies slapping together, a hand coming in front to wrap around Frank, pumping harder, faster, eyes rolling back in ecstasy. The pressure was building, the small moans of pleasure filling the room constantly now mixing with the sound of the shower. A loud groan with a muttered 'shit' was heard a moment before Frank spilled all over Gerard's hand. The tensing of his muscles and spasms going through his small body pushed Gerard into his own orgasm, his hand gripping Frank's hip tight enough to leave marks for at least a day.

Frank leaned heavily on the wall, his breathing erratic and his face beaded with sweat and shower water. Gerard was still pressed against his back, face nuzzled in his neck. He could hear the blood still rushing in his ears and feel Gerard's heart beating against his back. With a small smile, he twisted so he was facing Gerard again and let the man lean on him for support again. The pouring water was now starting to lose its warmth as the hot water began to run out. They still stood there, the water steadily getting cooler and cooler until suddenly it jumped from lukewarm to ice cold.

"GOD DAMN!" came the scream from the two men in the bathroom right before a large thud was heard, followed by the water being turned off.



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[info]silhouettes1
2006-05-12 08:38 pm UTC (link)
There is something so increidby dirty about shower sex. And I can't say I hate it. LOL. Nicely done again! I love your stuff!


PS. I'm not so very dazzling but I have been known to beta from time to time...

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[info]exiled_girl
2006-05-12 09:03 pm UTC (link)

..............

*melts* xD

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[info]gdmcrjunkie
2006-05-12 09:17 pm UTC (link)
Wow, how quick! Haha, I thought you'd post this tomorrow night earliest.

Loved it. Hot, hot, hot! You can never have enough shower sex fics and I love your inner fangirl for it =)

As for beta-ing, I'm pretty much a grammar nazi, so I can do it...

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[info]thetwistedstar
2006-05-12 11:18 pm UTC (link)
I'm a spelling nazi. I get sooo pissed at myself for spelling mistakes.

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[info]gdmcrjunkie
2006-05-12 11:51 pm UTC (link)
Yeah, me too! So I post and reread a couple more times to make sure I haven't missed any. And I lose my mind if I manage to miss a mistake anyway and someone else points it out... Chyeah.

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[info]annfrank
2006-05-12 09:51 pm UTC (link)
Yay for pointless shower smut! Wow, that hit the spot.

I'd beta for you. I love your stuff! I have to warn you though, I'm very anal (haha!) about spelling. For instance, I spotted two spelling mistakes in there :P

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[info]thetwistedstar
2006-05-12 11:19 pm UTC (link)
Meep! Where? *dies*

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[info]annfrank
2006-05-13 12:08 am UTC (link)
'tattooes' has no 'e'
'entertwined' should be 'intertwined'

Sorry, I feel like a real pedantic bitch now. Do I get the job? :)

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[info]thetwistedstar
2006-05-13 12:59 am UTC (link)
LOL! Those are two words I missed and I can't believe it! *dies*

I shall erase your memory now. Teehee.

And I'm still thinkin' bout the BETA...I shall make a post sometime tomorrow probably to discuss it.

*double checks for spelling errors*

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[info]oceans_of_glass
2006-05-12 10:38 pm UTC (link)
I must say it was dirty, revoltingly so.

.......I want more, gimme!

As for beta-ing, I have a lot of free time, so feel free to ask me if you need help ^^;

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[info]simeonrun
2006-05-12 11:30 pm UTC (link)
AHAHA!! Shower sex...good stuff peep!If you ever need a BETA or anything don't hesitate to ask!

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[info]skreweh_rebirth
2006-05-13 12:45 am UTC (link)
Shower secks. Ah, there isn't enough of it around lately. Much love for this. ♥

I would beta for you, but I don't have a lot of free time while I write chaptered stuff and I wouldn't want to screw it up :X. Love your stories as always though! ^_^

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[info]thepriestkitten
2006-05-13 10:54 am UTC (link)
i'm at the library,this was not worksafe but i read it all.. and i srsly had to bite on my lip ...*bites another moan back* yesss.. more?

showersex=yuum.

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[info]dametokillfor
2006-05-13 03:46 pm UTC (link)
And now I need a shower!
Yowsers, very hot!

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[info]silindro
2006-05-13 06:21 pm UTC (link)
*Sigh*
And I was actually planning on taking a shower in a minute... Now I don't think I can, too many dirty thoughts are linked to showering!

You write great shower sex, and for that, you get the Frankgasm icon! Mmmm, Frankgasm!

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[info]thetwistedstar
2006-05-14 02:19 am UTC (link)
Absolutely LOVING the Frankgasm!!!

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[info]silindro
2006-05-14 11:01 am UTC (link)
Yaaaaaaaaay!
I love it too:D

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[info]dani_roryyy416
2006-05-13 06:55 pm UTC (link)
eeekk so yummyyyyyy
showersex is the best <3

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[info]xanyi
2006-05-13 07:12 pm UTC (link)
Err.
I feel a little bit jelly-like.
That was really good.
Well-written too, and really, really yummy.
Chyeah.

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[info]simeonrun
2006-05-13 09:15 pm UTC (link)
Okay so I already said how damn sexy this story is but what the hell is a Frankgasm? Am I just being stupid for not knowing?

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[info]when_indoubt60
2006-05-13 09:36 pm UTC (link)
I'm guessing it's where his mouth opens like this:

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v672/sliptallicalady/Bands/frank27.jpg

Right?

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[info]when_indoubt60
2006-05-13 09:34 pm UTC (link)
I just twitched. That was sexy.. oh man. Me loves teh gee/frank schmexxxx *sings*

Beta- I'd do it but I really don't have anything cool to woo you with so.. erm.. :D

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[info]dis_inclined
2006-05-13 09:59 pm UTC (link)
Love you and your stories. Amazing, and you write these scenes so well, which is something I can't do. Yeah. I'd be willing to beta, but I'm sure there are others better than me. And I love that you write so fast! Keep these wonderful stories coming!
x

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[info]gcmadelv27grl01
2006-05-14 01:51 am UTC (link)
yay a new story :)... first monoply now a shower one... ur stories are great btw and i love the lil banners u put b4 them, theyre cute

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[info]thetwistedstar
2006-05-14 02:25 am UTC (link)
*grin* You are the first to comment on my banners. I enjoy making them and I'm glad you like them!

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[info]gcmadelv27grl01
2006-05-14 03:04 am UTC (link)
they cool and the stories go great with them..

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[info]ava_desrosiers
2006-05-14 06:10 pm UTC (link)
I love shower sex- it quite pointless because you're obviously having a shower to get clean only to get dirty again- it's totally worth it though!

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[info]yaoisex
2006-05-14 07:03 pm UTC (link)
Now I need a shower. A cold one.

Guh, that was so so hot! ^^

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[info]mystoryinstereo
2006-05-14 08:03 pm UTC (link)
wow. shower smut...totally hot. thank you. haha. :)

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[info]the_pauri
2006-05-14 08:06 pm UTC (link)
That was awesome-ly hawt, lady! Whoossssssh.

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[info]notmadeof_steel
2006-07-18 11:13 pm UTC (link)
I like joor banners... :)

THAT WAS...GAH!!! *hits herself over the head*

Jeez...I love you MORE now that perhaps ever. You were a porn director in a past life--that I have decided. :O

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[info]thetwistedstar
2006-07-18 11:29 pm UTC (link)
LOL! Really?!? That fucking ROCKS!

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[info]locked_x_loaded
2006-10-28 04:50 am UTC (link)
i really like the images that stick in my head after reading tht.
i loved it.

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[info]whatsername_d
2007-02-23 09:18 am UTC (link)
I love it. Everything. The start, the sex, and the ending.

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[info]quinncidence
2007-05-29 06:19 pm UTC (link)
:D
You're pieces have been making me all sorts of happy today! I've always been a fan, but I've been stalking people's memories and there's just been a consistant block where all I've read are things by you.

This is one is fucking nice. I'm way into the whole shower setting AND dominant Gee.
I liked how he bit a lot in this one. It brings me back to those old times, the times when people thought they were all vampires. -grin-

Last line. Favorite. Ever.

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